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Suspension of the Soul

The tension of this test
is the suspension of my soul.
I swear extended tension
will too soon take its toll.
I will tumble through this life,
await impending doom.
I will tumble through this life
to escape eternal gloom.
The tension of this test
is the suspension of my soul,
while I search for you,
for you to make me whole.

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Just playing with alliteration and rhyme.

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  • ennovy silver member
    October 26, 2007

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    Beautifully Penned

    Well it just shows me the lenght one would go to reach out for that special someone to make them whole...Excellent write......beautiful rhyme scheme...novy