Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

In the invisible

In the visible,
you seem to have a body, a face,
a voice which speaks to me
as if you were not me.

But in the invisible of my heart,
you do not have a face,
an age, an image.

Nobody can see you.
Nobody can know who you are.

You are a mystery
wrapped in silence.
You are the secret of a Being
adorned with absence.

You are what I am.
An unthinkable love
which does not depend
on anything or anybody to be.

You are what I shall never know
but that I am
in my deepest heart
where I do not have a body,
a face, an image
and where my voice which is your voice
is the sound of silence.

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • Pure Thought silver member
    April 26, 2007

    Edit | Reply

    So still and smooth

    It is difficult, when your life and heart is in turmoil, to find the center of Silence. The Silence so needed to help with the balance of life.

    I find you have written it here. Very beautifully done.
    I am so glad you decided to stay
    Buddy


    • suryame
      April 27, 2007
      Edit | Reply
      Thank you, dear friend, to come and visit the "here and now" of my heart. It's a great joy to share the inner melody of my being. Thank you to be deeply where I am...