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Its Gone

Walking
Silently
Down
A
Beaten
Broken
Path
...
My
Feet
Brusied
And
Bloody
...
Reaching
For
The
One
Thing
To
Keep
Me
Sane
...
Its
Gone
Never
Again
To
Be
Mine
...

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  • Sle3p
    May 25, 2007

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    What is it?maddie wonders.It was a wonderful poem thats what i know!i like the way you put the poem facing downward,it made it seem more scary it made it sound cooler like that.Great job keep up all your good work!


    -maddie


    • Libby Cullen
      May 29, 2007
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      Thank you so much for your comment. I wil be sure to return the favor!