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I Loved You.

I woke up this morning to sunshine,
and thought of you.
How we'd sit in the field behind a tree,
so no one knew
that I'd kiss your sweet lips.
And stare into your beautiful eyes
as green as the grass.
That was was the summer that didn't last.
I cried when I had to leave,
even now I still find it hard to breathe
when I think of your smile, it's been gone for awhile,
but still I smile through all the miles
Because,
I loved you.

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  • sadgurlfromnj16
    May 9, 2007
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    wow..that is so sweet and nice..and true good job!


  • aloneintheworld
    May 8, 2007
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    this is great one i know how you feel. wow i really love is one. you know what to write.


  • shattered-dreams-xx
    April 24, 2007

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    wow... this is so sweet.. it makes me want to just bawl you know? i truly love the way you sum this up.. its a wonderful write♥