I loved you once before
Now it's gone
Nothing
Just the emptiness remains.
I befriended you once before
Now its gone
Nothing
Just an indifference remains.
I held you once before
Now its gone
Nothing
Just a bare embrace remains.
I trusted you once before
Now its gone
Nothing
Just the memory remains.
Please tell me what you think
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Thank you for exressing, what so many of us are unable too...we give and give, only for naught, but we still give...
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sad, but i know where you are coming from. i let people in and all they do is mess with my stuff and leave me with a mess to clean up my self. i am not mad at those people, though. i like to think i was there when they needed me even if they could not be there for me. you write very well, i like how you repeated the word remains, it just gives the reader a sense of familiarity throught the entire peom. when i read this piece i am reminded of a baren waist land. every thing is all dried up and cant support any more life, however there is evidence of a once thriving population. it gives the sense of wonder amidst the emptyness. keep loving to write!
~ love the rain ~ -
Good and very sad write!
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