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One Minute Ago

Sitting in class
Scribbling little hearts
With your name in the centre
[A black heart]
x.|Your name in red texter|.x
Little scribbles along the side
Things like ‘I love you’
Appear in front of my eyes

It was only just a minute ago
When you wrapped me in your arms
It only lasted for a second
But to me it felt like a lifetime
Your cute little smile
The warmth of your chest
Your strong arms
The tickle of your breath
But the moment we broke away
I immediately felt cold
And when you left I felt alone
Nothing is as far away as one minute ago

Sitting in class
Now playing anywhere but here:
We’re sitting down by the sea
In the sand
Under a sky of pink and purple
And rapidly spreading stars
We’re sitting there by the sea
And you're kissing me.

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Dedicated to my boyfriend, Chris!

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  • hopeful-tragedy
    August 11, 2007

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    Aw, this is such a lovely poem. The first stanza was amazing, and "nothing is as far away as one minute ago," really got to me. Cute poem.


  • CazzieJade
    April 25, 2007

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    Awwwwwww!!!!!!!!!
    This is effin ssssooooo cute!!
    Gosh. Lol..

    "[A black heart]
    x.|Your name in red texter|.x"

    Emo love. Lollll (had to say it)

    Aww again.. lol.
    Good write tommmmmmy...

    Ily.
    Burrdifly ♥