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My Raw Emotion Beckons You

The girls that swoon all over you
I say that they aren't real
They want the attention of being with you
But they can't understand how you feel

I know you, I feel it in my blood
Each time we speak I feel you inside
Your words race through my veins
Your touch causes pathways to collide

You must experience this phenomenon too
Its voltage is too intense to ignite only one
But you don't appear to be affected
While I have become completely undone

I seek a whisk in the wind
A slight change in direction
It will hit you and you will
Surrender to my need for your affection

I can say I will always be there
But we both know that cannot be true
There is a limit on this woman's waiting time
Rescue me while I am still waiting for you

Please tell me what you think

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  • Lady Voldemort silver member
    April 24, 2007
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    alright...whose perspective are you writing from here?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?

    • RockNeverSleeps
      April 24, 2007
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      it's my perspective, it is real feelings but not to one particular person, to the person of my dreams i guess lol