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Intoxicated words

Intoxicated words of passion and love,
deceit is all he will ever speak of.


Smooth and sly, with cunning smiles,
your his fantasy dream, his delusional trials.


Twisting your words to cut like a knife,
to take hold, and control your life.


Destroy a soul, a heart turned sour,
possessive, neurotic more obsessive by the hour.


A delusional mind turns aggressive, your soul torn,
shatters your heart, a life, a possession just a pawn.


He will destroy you and leave you for dust,
he'll still say he love's you, that is a must.


Guilts you with a deceitful sorrow and fake tears,
to abuse you again tomorrow and bring back those fears.


Intoxicated words said to destroy, your hearts ripping,
deceit and delusion leaves your life slipping.

Author notes

Contest Option 6 - word bank
love
smiles
knife
sour
torn
dust
tears
ripping

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  • XXBrunettexBarbieXX
    May 23, 2007

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    this was a really great write..being intoxicated is sometimes the best way to escape from your problems and feelings in life keep writting youve got talent


  • Crazy-Baby
    May 8, 2007
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    congratulations! thanx for entering x x x


  • Tears of Roses
    April 26, 2007

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    WOW what a wonderful piece
    I loved the word useage
    Reminds me of people I know
    May you be showered in Roses

    Teresa

  • Crazy-Baby
    April 24, 2007

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    wow i love this, its so moving and powerfull! and i can relate to it aswell. well done on the use of the word bank, good luck and thanx for entering! x x x