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Breath Like A Coconut



Each breath
So fresh and new
How powerfully it enters me
It's all I can do
To hold back the tears
That well to meet it's enormity.
Through this tiny being
This speck so small
It's force is magnifique

That You have shown me
A wonder such as this
Thank you
From the depths of my heart

Each breath
So fresh and new
How sweetly it enters me
So gently that wave
Of the purest love
Washes into the shore
Completing it's journey
From far out at sea;
Bringing this little coconut home
To start afresh





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  • Stoychi
    May 2, 2007
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    Dear Taranand thanks

    This poetry site is beautiful, i like it very much
    your poetry is beautiful, coming from your heart,
    within which is a place,
    where all inner seeds really sprouts.
    My great respect to you, who don't hide who teaches you how to connect with your inner realm.


  • transcendental baby gold member
    April 25, 2007

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    I know how precious those breaths are to you my friend ... this is a beautiful statement of joy and reverence for the privledge of being able to ride the waves of air


  • Puppydog gold member
    April 24, 2007
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    AW, HOW BEAUTIFUL!

    When someone brings their love to you from far away it seems as if it comes from heaven itself.


    • Taranand
      April 24, 2007
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      AHhh..Puppydog, the far away and very close I refer to are within me. Love Tara