Lusty filled thoughts have taken all control
Fulfilling wants nestled deep in my soul
The smell of your musk has driven me wild
Our tantric dreams have become so beguiled
A juicy burst of passionate kissing
Days from now I'll still be reminiscing
Your hands are so strong I can feel them still
My body aches for your pleasure to fill
Twisted within your sweet moist drops of dew
Through every pore your love will imbue
Enter so slowly to feel every inch
Unfold in my mind just like a lip synch
Sultry invitations, pleasantly sweet
Without hesitations, sexual treat
Author notes
BLUEYEZ
Sonnets are formal poems and consist of 14 lines (3 quatrains and a couplet) , traditionally written in iambic pentameter - that is, in lines ten syllables long, with accents falling on every second syllable.
imbue - spread or diffuse through
lip synch - combining audio and video recording in such a way that the sound is perfectly synchronized with the action that produced it; especially synchronizing the movements of a speaker's lips with the sound of his speech
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- Public Places && Tangled Bed Sheets by bird-mad girl.
1200 points, ended May 19, 2007, 20 entries
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a very tasty treat. it was yummy and I want more.
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Very sensual, I love the rhyme, great work
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Yikes!
Very earthy, interesting sonnet! I love seeing a woman's perspective on this and pretty much any other subject! (especially this!) Well done.
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Incredibly erotic....yummmyyy.....Splendid....
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I'm a fan!
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OOOOoooh La Laaaa! you know i had to read it as soon as i saw the title!!!
lovely little "adult" write, my girl!!!! I think the title is damn awesome!! It pulled my horn dog ass in!! 
no, really, this was a beautiful, yet sensual filled write!! lovely!!!
Rianna
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done
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Lively... erotic pleasure composed with real class. The flow and image blend to imbue a fantasy of sensations in the mind. Well done!
Love,
Amera
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