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The Greatest Ending Ever Produced By The Wonderful Poet Keanes!

Chips of guilt
Settle painfully
In my stomach

The End.

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  • keanes
    April 24, 2007
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    Still wonderful

    Ok, here is what I would write to finish your poem:



    I wash them down
    with hard booze
    and yesterday's news

    fin


  • keanes
    April 24, 2007
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    I think it's wonderful.

    Yes yes, very interesting. But this is what I mean...do we need a thousand verses, a thousand diamond newspaper clippings, buried verbal treasure in order to create something poetic. I honestly think that your poem is good on its own two feet. Visit your local museum for more details...