Streams
flow through
dreams so true
the emotion
the passion, things you do
your touch and romantic motion
your kisses can cease my souls commotion
it can mend my broken heart tearing at the seams
I feel your touch from across the ocean
I feel your love and devotion
I see your smile shine through
the emotion
flowing through
from new
dreams
A contest entry
- Diatelle Form by Samplette.
450 points, ended May 3, 2007, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This a great write. Almost perfect form. It looks like you skipped a line in the last half of the piece, the two syllable line with the b rhyme. Other than that a good write. I will read again at judging. Thank you for entering the contest.
Sam
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