Camouflaged - or do you feel me
creeping up without a ripple
stealth and armor hidden
a cold reptile in cold water
Prey for me
don’t think you’re a delicacy
I’ll rip and swallow parts
that I disregard whole
then your warmth will dissipate
My habitat you invade
disregarding rules of nature
enjoy the view
before your eyeballs pop out
Author notes
This was created for the painting
"down on the bayou"
by Muddy King
in his contest: http://allpoetry.com/contest/2348024
A contest entry
- Art on the Bayou (closes at midnight) by MuddyKing.
400 points, ended April 24, 2007, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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You new I was a crocadile in my domain. It makes me wonder what was the last thing he seen.GREATSTUFF!!!
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I like this one , although the echo with cold stumbled my read...
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Oh, you made me admire you!
See? You did that! Made me think how brilliant this poem is! 
Now, what will I do? Just kick the wall and wish I could write like that! 
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