Sitting here
Struggling to write
Never liking my inspiration
Just gonna let it flow
It can lead you in all sorts of directions
If you learn to trust insinct
Trust your heart
It won't take you off the beaten path
Those who say that it lies
Have been betrayed
Not by their heart
But by someone elses
And their heartless
Have no affection for others
A contest entry
- Your Wish Is My Command (LOL) by fairytalelovestory.
350 points, ended September 15, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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you are a very good writer we are sooo much alike it's not even funny i'm gonna put some new poems up soo
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articulant
very nice peom. i encourage you to look at mine and tell me what you think. -
amazing
i love it
I especially love the third to last part
=]
your amazing
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