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Shadow of the Past (#4)

Watching my careless days melt away
Now only a puddle, a shadow of what they were
I have only memories to cherish
Sweet memories and their soft allure
How could it all be gone
My snowman melted before it was ever there
Now I’m lost in a sea of confusion
Maturity that never ceases to glare

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  • anoetic poet
    April 25, 2007
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    Sincere and rings so very true...
    "My snowman melted before it was ever there
    Now I’m lost in a sea of confusion"
    Lovely write! Thanks for entering and good luck!