i know you won't read this and i don't blame you. but im putting it here just in case. i want to first say that im sorry for hurting you. you deserved so much better than me. if it helps at all i didn't cheat on you. i told you i did so you'd hate me. unfortuanatly it worked. i planned to kill myself after you hated me but i chickend out. i go to your page quite often but you said to never talk to you again, and i will not go against your wishes. your on right now and its making me cry not to be able to send you a message. from what i've learned you got a new girl. shes extreamly lucky. i just wanted to say all this, im sorry and i will forever love you.
this is not a poem and im not really looking for comments
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eh
the immature angst displayed unceremoniously regarding empty suicide threats really detracts from what started out as a decent work -
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ok...im stupid and really couldn't understand anything you just said...
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"i planned to kill myself after you hated me but " = like, totally, totally lame, you dig, square? (wobbles head like dumb eighties blond cheerleader)
rest of poem could turn out to be better without the above part in quotes -
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ok now i see... well to be honest it's not a poem. its more of a confession. i do appreaciate your honesty though. if you wouldn't mind could you please check out some of my other poems...all the comments i get are very nice but not very helpfull when it comes to trying to improve my writting.
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Girl work it out!!! Don't end things this way. Tell the truth and at lest be friends. Don't lie to push people away out of fear. I have done it most my life and it really hurt. Believe me it is sometimes worth the pain of loving and losing then never letting people close.
Nicely said and I hope you work it out.
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omg this might not be a poem but tis heart felt my guys name is jordan. well he was mine. i miss him but hes got somebody new. if this boys it dont let hime go. cuz he'll be ur everything when you have nothing else.
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aww thankyou so much! im hoping he's the one...everything seems like its gong to work out so yay! hope everything works out for you. thankyou so much for commenting!
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I need this right about now
The truth is Kels that shits gone down hill and I kinda miss you. I felt like shit when I told u all that and I wanted to take it back...I check ur page too I just didn't put anything because I didn't want to ruin your life with your new guy which I guess you don't really have. So basically with all this I'm sayin...do U miss what it was? do you want it back?
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can i have it back? i was sure you already found someone new...if your willing to take me back jordan i want to be with you
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