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Ashbury Falling

A leaf falls downwards to the earth below,
The jeweled moon ever so fragile in opened minds.
You see a hopeless monster falling to sea,
But you hold your head in laughter,
Because you know its only me...

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  • FaintWhispers
    May 18, 2007
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    That's lovely.
    I really liked the last line.
    Good job, & thanks for entering.