Breathing, Because I like the steady pace in my ears
A little bit of stillness, because I cant stand all this moving.
When Did I loose touch, with what I thought was me.
Lets trace back my tainted heart...
All those tall tale's amused for the hour
but my soul still wreaked with the false pulse...
My eyes hide truths, and exaggerated wannabe stories
Attention, we all thrive on it
Why cant I??
Lost in swirls of pretty patterns
and an image I want to fit in to...
One brutal slap in the face...
& I fucking woke up....
A deep dip, into a bath of realization
I needed it, I needed it...
I could feel the sticky lies peeling off my skin
Letting go off all those ties felt so amazing...
No more image...
No more fixing myself for them
Sick of not being good enough
I decided that I was
& that was what they needed to hear
It felt so good to breath again...
Without their restrictions
Not quite accepted,
Not quite rejected
I walk the line of outcast, and Beauty queen
Because I know what they look at is me,
They just dont know how to handle all that
Imperfect Perfection....
A contest entry
- Identity by Escape--.
300 points, ended May 11, 2007, 39 entries
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No more image...
No more fixing myself for them
Sick of not being good enough
I decided that I was
"Not quite accepted,
Not quite rejected
I walk the line of outcast, and Beauty queen"
and that line rocked ass!
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Hehe. Forgot These =]
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"Breathing, Because I like the steady pace in my ears
A little bit of stillness, because I cant stand all this moving.
When Did I loose touch, with what I thought was me. "
Shit baby. You have no clue how much I can relate to that right now.
"Lost in swirls of pretty patterns
and an image I want to fit in to"
"& I fucking woke up....
A deep dip, into a bath of realization
I needed it, I needed it...
I could feel the sticky lies peeling off my skin
Letting go off all those ties felt so amazing...
No more image...
No more fixing myself for them"
Wow bb. Just wow.
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Lost in swirls of pretty patterns
and an image I want to fit in to...
that and the ending line made me fall in love with you ♥ imperfect imperfection.. xp thats why i have my screen name ♥ bwweautiful hun bweautiful-let it all out ♥
PrettyxImperfection
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Imperfect perfection. Yes...we strive to be perfect but yet...we make ourselves even more broken and not perfect then when we startd. It will all work out in the end. It has to.
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