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Serene Song

Guilt
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Chips of guilt
Settle painfully
In my stomach

While artificial expressions
Shoot me
Into the  depths of nerves

The autumn never cries
The winter never shies
The spring never dries
Seasons only spring needed hopes

Let us hug each other
  we  are  all the sprouts raised
after planting seeds Of humanism indeed!

Let the flag of peace fly high
Rolling down the heads of war planners
Let the sparrow and  Eagle  sing together
to take away the expression of  guilt from the serene minds
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Author notes

let the peace wins in all stances

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  • Katie Lazette
    April 23, 2007
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    Nice Write

    Good imagery and content, The flow of the poem is good.