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Country Livin

My town only has 224 people.
But you can bet I love it here.
You can go muddin with the guys.
Or go hang by the creek and drink beer.
Take a ride down devils.
Or go to circle bottom.
If you're looking for parties.
You know that we got'em.
Go have a barbecue,
Down by the lake.
The girls here get down and dirty.
And we love to eat steak.
You can get a bunch of people,
To help you haul hay.
They're only there to help.
They don't expect you to pay.
Everyone goes to church.
But gossip spreads quick.
And everyone's close,
Out here in the sticks.

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  • Maybe Anastasia
    May 7, 2007

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    haha I laughed out loud at the last line I don't really know why but it just seems to fit soo well. awesome even if it is a little rough. Thanks for the entry.


  • sweet nightmares
    May 1, 2007

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    idk y but i find this cute. and calming at that. isnt sumthing i can relate to but its great that u can b proud of ur life.

  • sarahwantstostaple
    April 24, 2007
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    thanks chicka i just wasn't in the mood to write all that wierd stuff i normally do and i saw this contest and i had to enter in it.


  • Greggs Girl
    April 24, 2007
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    WOW

    This is so different from your other poetry and I love it.