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I Want You

I want you can I have you for just tonight,
To cradle you in my arms and hold you tight,
To kiss and caress you to have you just for one day,
So I can open up and tell you the things I long to say.

I want you can I have you just for a while,
To watch you sleeping and adore your smile,
To feel your body up against mine and your heartbeat fast,
To listen to you intensively about your history and your past.

I want you can I have you for a short time,
To touch you and hug you and pretend you where mine,
I won’t take you away from your love, your joy you’re boo,
I just want you to acknowledge she’s not the only one that loves you.

I want you but I can’t have you and I won’t steal you away,
I just wait for the day when you come to me to stay,
Because I’m no man stealer I’ll wait for the good things in life,
And I’m hoping you’ll see my love and make me your wife.

I want you can I have you when your ready,
I’ll wait penitently for us to go steady,
I’m willing to let go for you to come back in good health,
I want you and can’t wait to have you to myself.

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  • my.stars.dont.shine
    April 25, 2007
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    Ahh.. I absolutly love, love this poem! I feel the same way. Awesome job!!

  • Prince of Destiny
    April 25, 2007

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    I have to say, I rarely leave any comments, but I definitely had to on this one. This poem go to me and my heart and I truly enjoyed this. Hope to see what else you have in your poetry arsenal. Would you want me!? Nice poem. ~LX~


  • forever-hoping
    April 24, 2007
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    I love the repetitiveness of "I want you can I have you"...wonderful poem!!