I have a dream of happiness a place of unlimited fantasy,
I have a dream of hope to fulfil my true destiny,
I have a dream of peace a world of simple harmony,
I have a dream of love a special place for you and me,
I have a dream of sorrow a world in the devils hand,
I have a dream of independence where every one takes a stand,
I have a dream of freedom for the mind to think endlessly,
I have a dream of change for the whole world including me,
I have a dream of longing for some thing in our hearts,
I have a dream of togetherness when the worlds divided in parts,
I have a dream of moving around this big world we call home,
I have a dream of companionship in a world where we are all alone,
I have a dream of a million dreams full of possibilities, goals, plans set in glue
I have a dream almost once a day as the majority of my dreams come true.
Please tell me what you think
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Dreams are one of the first steps to a happy life. This poem is a great example of that. It's very nice, but what I would do is put commas and periods where needed, running sentences together makes the reader confused and couldn't really understand it until they say it really slowly or reread it.
But besides that, it was a great poem.
~ I.t. -
And may all your dreams come true. Nice thoughts...nice poem. If I did anything to "improve it" it would be to add some punctuation...but that is a poet's choice. I just think it would make this read a little better.
Example: "I have a dream of peace, a world of simple harmony"
Oh well. I enjoyed the write and write on, poet!!!
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