There is a little Angel,
her name is Ellie Jane,
she bounces round spreading love,
and then go's round again.
She started pay it forward,
it was her special cause,
this little angel is so wise,
and does not mind your flaws.
If children are our future,
I want that future to be,
full of kids like Ellie Jane,
to keep each other company.
Now Ellie Jane a little bird,
has said you're not yourself,
and that you are in need of love,
so here's a little elf.
It cannot protect you from,
every hurt and every storm,
but it carries tons of love,
for you to drink each morn.
And our dearest little-hug,
I've one more thing to say,
imagine great big hugs from me,
every hour of every day.
Author notes
Ellie I really hope that you are back to your bouncy happy self very soon, and I'm rooting for you. Here for you any time, love Kay
A contest entry
- BLESSINGS AND LOVING THOUGHTS # 7 : ~ LITTLE HUG ~ by maa.
1682 points, ended May 13, 2007, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Ellie truly is a special child. He age compares none with and against her wisdom. She is so full of love and compassion it is no wonder she is adored by you as well as myself and many others. Your penned gift is of the sweetest and most endearing nature. One that truly touches the heart with a gentle warmth to make it sing a sweet tune. One I am certain Ellie will dance to for a long time to come still. Thank you for entering and good luck to you!
Blessings
celticmoon
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Thanks for reading and commenting celticmoon, I concur completely with what you have said about Ellie. Thank you so much for the very touching words, and the good luck. Best wishes to you
Kay
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Dear Kay thank you so much for this beautiful, kind, pretty poem !
I'm a little bit speechless so I'm sorry if I'm not finding the right words to say how much this means to me.. 
Your words are so kind, they are touching my heart and making me smile and thank you for the little elf 
and the great big hugs !! I love how this poem flows and rhymes. It is dancing on the page and in my mind
love
ellie
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Ellie *angel*
honey you are so very welcome. I'm really pleased my poem touched you and made you smile Thats precisely what I hoped it would do. You are a very special person who is wise beyond your years, ans someone whose light touches the lives of many. I truly hope you are feeling better and whatever was the matter is okay now. Love and hugs Kayxx
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bless this so so cute hehe x reminds me of little kids when they hurt themselves and you just want to cuddle them better x good imagery and language used too x keep it up -
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Thank you for reading and for your lovely comments. That is precisely the kind of tone I was aiming for
Big to you K
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This is an adorable poem...says so much...caring words...just wonderful, the imagination within leaves the reader smiling...well done, thanks for sharing
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Thanks so much for your comment, I am really pleased it made you smile. Best wishes
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oh this is sweet
i think you will like the pixes poems on here
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Thank you very much for your comment, please send me the link for the pixes poem i would very much like to read it
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This is so very sweet.
What a lovely poem to cheer one up.
Flows so smoothly, easy to read.
Very enjoyable.
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Thank you very much for your comments, Ellie is a very sweet person and deserves a sweet poem I'm pleased that you enjoyed reading it, and hope that it does cheer Ellie up
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dear kay,
this is soooo sweet ... I can feel the love and energy flowing from your words and entering my heart ... and definitely ellies's heart as well ... no doubt ... it is true that our little treasure always sees the good in all, never searching for flaws ... (she certainly won't become a diamond-dealer
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I absolutely join you when you pronounce the wish to see "future" filled with children like ellie ...
please be confident : she is a true light and will certainly light many lamps ...
many blessings,
maa
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maa,
thank you for your comments, I have entered contests held by Ellie in the past and have seen glimpses of the beautiful, unique person she is. I was very surprised when I realised her age the first time, she has such wisdom, compassion and intelligence for someone so young. I agree that she will touch many lives and as you put it light many lamps. I sincerely wish her all the very best Many blessings to you also, you are also someone who touches many.
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