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I am sorry

everyday i wake,
I try not to cry.
I am so far away,
but i am still sorry!
I cant be there for you,
and i cant change your mind,
What ever you do,
I still care for you!
I am so sorry.
I am sorry i am slipping away,
but i try not to.
I am sorry i fall away.
I am here for none the matter

GRRR!!TELL ME GOOD STUFF OR ELSE!!!jkjkjk

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  • Xcall me supermanX
    May 3, 2007
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    wow you write so good!


  • Dark Magician
    May 1, 2007

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    kewlness

    This was really good. I liked the way that you expressed feelings for someone even though they are still far away. Great write and Great job!!!

  • psybrbddy
    April 27, 2007
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    Pretty sad but good


  • Dirty and Broken
    April 23, 2007

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    i don't understand the last line, or the line about changin my mind (about what??)
    it's a good poem, though...
    *hugs*