Beneath fiery skies
Dreams are fulfilled and lives end
Beneath fiery skies
A heart beats stronger
Beneath fiery skies
Our love is all we need
Author notes
written for a contest Option #3 title 4
A contest entry
- Options for all you poetic people!!! by moment liver.
675 points, ended June 6, 2007, 66 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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It's short but it's as if it includes everything. You've captured death, love, and life. Awesome job. I loved it. Keep writing from within and best of luck.
See you around the deep end
moment liver -
nice, this is nice, i like this it really is something, keep it flowing and good luck in th contest
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thanks man glad you like it
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