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my chain

with words and a paper
I bound you to me
for better or worse
is how we commit
i did not know
that i would become your misery
dragging you down
choking your will
bruising your soul
our bond was to be security
should i break my chain
and set you free

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  • Moonlight Mistress
    April 24, 2007
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    oh wow.

    i do not know your exact situation. but i do see a guy thats trying to do whats best, that doesnt wanna bring his lover down. but at the same time wants to be happy.. don't give up or break the chain! keep on truckin. this is a beautiful heartfelt poem


  • sarahblu
    April 24, 2007

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    damn honey, don't you dare. i love this one.. you should read it out loud.. maybe see if you can smooth it out a bit. you really wrote this piece from your heart and it shows