Climb the wall of self reliance
be careful not to look behind
the ladder reaches as far as you dream
A contest entry
- Graffiti Grab by rufina caraid.
500 points, ended May 6, 2007, 17 entries
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Beautiful meaning behind these words. So profound in their meaning, maybe multiple meanings for some.
Thank you for this entry.
Von -
What amazing shapes you have on your author page. Must take lots of time to get it just right. Liked these lines of graffiti grab. So many things written all over the place - never know what one can read when they round the corner. LOL
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OOOOO... I like! For some that ladder can reach way beyond, for others, it doesn't reach far enough. A very interesting write with lotsa deep thought. Thanks for sharing. Love and hugs...
~Donna~
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past, written in stone
future, but forsaken dreams
let me live, today
-Eddy
You are right, we are our own best restraints for nothing
holds us tighter than our thoughts...
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Thanks!
Dear Just4u,
Thanks for the great comment - I like your three liner addition too!
We can accomplish so much more than we think.
Tang
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Nice write.
I like the image of the ladder going on beyond where we are.
Thanks.
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Thanks!
Dear cactus thorn,
Thanks so much for a wonderful comment - I like your take on it!
Tang
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