Smile little Daisy - the world is yours still,
Love is still easy - if love me, you will.
Close yours eyes, darling, I'll hum you a dream
Of rainbows and ribbons and other sweet things.
Laughter and happiness shimmer around
As life takes your hand and dances around,
Singing softly and kindly to you, its love-child,
Time laughs now, so restless, so youthful and wild.
Smile now, my Daisy, for life is a game
And you hold all the cards without saying a thing.
Possibilities endless and waiting for you -
Smile please, my Daisy, for I love you too.
Author notes
For my own little daisy
A contest entry
- Help Cheer These Girls Up by LIve For Today.
600 points, ended April 25, 2007, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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awsome!!!!!!!!!!!!!
nice poetry! i love it!
your sis,
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gracie! nice one! i luv it, its sooooo good
better than mine.
your sis,
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Aww,,,
Awww...I think this is so sweet and poetic. It completely cheered me up. It's simple, but its supposed to be. Its nice. I would love this to be published, so I could read this to my future child . -
I'm going to keep this short and sweet, just like the poem itself, cheers for providing something thats cheered me up. Nice one, lovely read well written.
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congulations on the bronze , thank you for entering and helping cheer the girls up
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thank you : )
Thank you for the bronze, and for hosting a great contest.
gracie
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A lovely write, so sweet. Uplifting and encouraging. Good imagery, flow and tone. Nice rhyme. Lovely depth of feeling. Melodic. Good word choice. Nice alliteration and assonance. A well crafted piece.
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This is so sweet, what a sweet poem!
Laughter and happiness shimmer around
As life takes your hand and dances around,
Singing softly and kindly to you, its love-child,
Time laughs now, so restless, so youthful and wild.
Such a delight to read on a warm spring day, and love is in bloom!
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I really like this poem alot , talks about the child and for he
r not to give up
mile little diasy the world is still yours , yes the world dtill belongs to the children -
Awww very nice. enjoyable poem,
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