I know what it’s like to be skinny and still want [less and less]
The best feeling in your life is stepping on the scale
Just to discover you lost another pound
Dropping those pant sizes and belt loops
Tripping on Nevermore in the guttered alleyways
Broken crystal balls litter your bathroom floor
Wondering why you’re even here to begin with
But don’t worry because we’re all neon-laced fairies
On their way to supermodel-stardom
So take up your burning torch, be an individual
Don’t adhere to the M&M lunch fantasy
Author notes
this is for the AP user Fallen forever.
i hope this gives her hope
to know she's not alone.
A contest entry
- 0 by Lauren Noir.
850 points, ended June 2, 2007, 27 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Why did you ever leave? I miss reading your work. You brought a refreshing makeover to poetry. Please come back. I miss my estranged, but cool cousin.
Safely hidden in the darkness,
~ The Rocker Who Lost All -
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I like it alot =]]]
really pwetty
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Damn Good!
Wow...
I suffered from an eating disorder... I felt this way too...
I'ts great that you're telling people not to conform...
STICK IT TO THE MAN!
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"But don’t worry because we’re all neon-laced fairies
On their way to supermodel-stardom
So take up your burning torch, be an individual
Don’t adhere to the M&M lunch fantasy"
Wow;; you are just simply amazing.
Wonnnnderful♥
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I love this
You got the feel of it
You got the emotions, and the feelings exactly
The bit with dropping weight and belt loops, it's just amazing
And it was amazing to know that someone is there
And I, and all the sufferers are not alone
beauitful mesage and wonderful description
well done, thank you so much for the entry
All my love
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OMG BBYDOLL
this is fan-fucking-tastic
I can relate to this soo much
welldone bby
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wow... i'm at a loss for words on this one...just...wow
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oh. wow.
story of my life.
love this.
because its so true.
&& no;;
she's not alone.
beautifully written baby.
♥
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Well-written
You are a very talented writer. I've been tempted toward this same path many times before, but it's not worth it. Excellent write, and good luck in the contest.
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Wow. That's all I got to say Hun.
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Hopeful
i love how you always incorperate beautiful images into such tragic poetry.. And that's a compliment..
--Your Pretty Little Whore--
+XxshotxX+
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that's very good
AMAZING
it touches me deeply! -
wow.
i love this-
i keep wondering why you added me of all ppl to you favorites. your the one everyone should be adding. -
OHHHH I FORGOT THESE!!
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Dropping those pant sizes and belt loops
Tripping on Nevermore in the guttered alleyways
Broken crystal balls litter your bathroom floor
Wondering why you’re even here to begin with
Doll face that was amazing!!!
you are such an amazing poet!!
I love all your work!!!
and this is tunning,
words of encouragement are always awe inspiring!
♥♥♥
xXbrokenXx
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