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My Gift to you

My beloved...for lifetimes I have belonged to you and only you,
Your life itself is the very air that I breathe,
Always I will love you forever.
I will always be with you.
I will do everything for you.
My love, my heart, my life is for you.
This is my gift to you.
My beloved I love you.

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This is my gift to you.
My beloved I love you.

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  • beccab
    April 23, 2007

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    all right

    .. .this is a little cliche, it's alright though, it's more like deep thinking or stuff you should just say out loud or something.. blah..ness


  • poetry within
    April 23, 2007
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    I love the first line/ I can relate to that line so much. It's truly beautiful. What a great expression of you love for your mate. This is a heartfelt write,it's as if you let your heart penn this piece for you. It's passionate tasteful and filled with love. Simply beautiful