chips of guilt
settle painfully
in my stomach
(Pringle points of view askew)
gall so bitter
(I recall)
I spat it out
no doubt my tongue
is insincere
the lie slid out
easily
salty as a tear
(original of course...
I needed the salt fix)
A contest entry
- Guilt ... by Polaja.
700 points, ended May 23, 2007, 19 entries
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A la carte
why not with some snacks too. A new idea for me to write like this.
excellent.
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salty
was curious what you would put on next and ran into this contest
not a contester but I'm in
even if I hate stuff written between parenthesis
(even if it’s part of…
anyways your take on it seams a protest against hypocrisy
best of luck
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This is interesting. I never considered splitting the author's original work. It works out well for you though and makes this a completely different entry because of this.
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