The autumn sky sets in burning red flame,
Setting fire to the golden-orange trees
Who groan as the wind blows, blushing in shame
While undressing, leaves fall in the breeze.
Now, as the darkening sky falls asleep
The wind whispers a song to the trees,
Restless and wanting and haunting, so deep
The trees whisper back, kissing the breeze.
Author notes
idk about this one lol... hope you like it
A contest entry
- Hmm, I'm Sure You Can Do It! by xxRainbowDawnxx.
300 points, ended April 26, 2007, 10 entries
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Comments
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I....love this. I love the personification of the nature and the verbs. It's so beautiful.
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This is a really good rhyming scheme my friend. I love the imagery and the choice of words very deep. Light and dark, both so very beautiful! x
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