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The Necromancer

A necromancer is just a human
A necromancer is just plain powerful
A necromancer can be good or evil
But he or she is treated as a god.

If bothered you will lose your soul
When touched it saps you clean
Your energy will be useless to save you
When you mess with this powerful being.

Some say a god others say a man
But I say somewhere in between.
For a necromancer is niether alive nor dead
But the Heavens won't take him
And Hell has fear of him so he is stuck on the
Place called Earth.

When the Gods finally deside his fate
Late will they be
For a necromancer has cheated before
What stops him from doing it again!

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  • Insane-Joe
    February 19

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    I really like this poem...I've read poems of vampires, demons, and lycans but this is the first one I read about a Necromancer...very creative


  • songstress80
    October 5, 2008

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    very well-written work, but you misspelled "neither" (3rd paragraph, 3rd line),you put "niether". don't worry, lots of us do it...lol. great job on defining and explaining what a necromancer is to you. nice work!


  • chasing rainbows
    January 17, 2008

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    I don't really know how to respond to this, but it's good. I just don't know how it makes me feel (don't take it personally, I tend to be pretty vague in general).

    What quote did you use?

  • Maddmathman
    October 17, 2007

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    i guess i know what a necromancer is now. good poem. but how does one become a necromancer?
    yeah, original poem. its fun learning new things, especially when put together in a fun way like that.


    • Lord Viceroy
      October 31, 2007
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      You are born into necromancy or learn it from another necromancer

  • RottenXHeartX
    October 1, 2007

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    I like the way you have the balance of God or man! Also alive and dead
    This was great, keep writin


  • LittleBoPeep
    July 29, 2007
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    great poem its so true and beautifuly writen


  • Whisper Trinity
    July 28, 2007

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    ~*~

    Great poem! Most of the time Necromancers are really misunderstood but you really seemed to pinpoint it greatly in this poem! Great job! Blessed Be!


  • Soul Boi
    July 20, 2007
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    you of all ppl know that we are not humans nor gods but higher.


  • fierra
    June 6, 2007
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    cool poem!


  • Andrecious
    June 5, 2007
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    great work i am also a necromancer it is not hard to become one but yeah great work

  • demongod666
    May 30, 2007

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    ???

    this poem is confusin me what the hell. i guess it's ok but i still have no clue what the hella necromancer is?? from sqeeks


  • guttermouthxgirl
    May 30, 2007
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    you can try but I don't have one...

    lol I really like this... I liek the whole aspect of a "god" taking someones soul (or trying ) and then that "god" being cheated out of it hence why the last verse is my favourite. Good job. Love it. I liek imagery that pops intoi my head too.
    XxX Nikole XxX


  • Wulf-Eyez De Winter gold member
    May 29, 2007
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    Nicely written


  • ShotgunGoddess
    May 12, 2007
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    awww now I wanna be a necromancer >.<

    anyways...really amazing poem! the descriptiveness was very very good.


  • FifthDove
    April 23, 2007

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    Welcome to Allpoetry!

    A very thought provoking piece. I never heard of a necromancer before. He doesn’t sound like someone I’d like to meet either. Lol Nice workDove

    • Lord Viceroy
      April 23, 2007
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      Thank you. Not all necromancers are bad I meen I am a necromancer.

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