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War is Raw

War backwards is raw
Like that soldier's flesh
Being eaten by vultures

A contest entry

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  • rufina caraid gold member
    May 5, 2007

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    So true. Your description is graphic and one doesn't need an image to see what you are saying here.
    Perhaps by using our imagination instead of having the image pasted in front of our eyes on every corner it would penetrate deeper into our thoughts and hopefully have a more positive effect on the realities of both past and current wars.
    Thanks for this entry.
    Von


  • intanglio2ring
    April 23, 2007

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    Oooo! Ahhhhh!

    Dear RememberTheSeljurks,
    Yep! This one is certainly raw and to the point - for a pointless war and killing of people.
    Good Luck in the contest!
    Tang


  • penman gold member
    April 23, 2007
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    Excellent

    Wonderful short poem on the subject of war. Good luck in the contest.