Talk southern to me
let your voice wash over me
like the river rushes over the rocks
Talk low and sweet
let it lull me
like rain on the roof
Talk quiet and wild
let it set me free
like horses running on the wind
Talk smooth and calm
let it dance to my ears
like music for the soul
Talk southern to me
Author notes
Idk it's about a southern drawl. mmm sweet music.
A contest entry
- Options for all you poetic people!!! by moment liver.
675 points, ended June 6, 2007, 66 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Nice
I had to read the passage dance to my ears again, but it works. I enjoyed the read. Keep it up. -
great
its a great poem its one of the best i have ever read its short and its just like wow keep it up i would like to read more from you
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lol, this is something, i like it you did a good job on this but to me it seems a littel short like there could be more for you to say, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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