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Here I am again
Will this never end?
It shouldn't be this way
Why I can't I keep the good to stay?
Sometimes it is just right
But only give it one night.
Fleeting moment
Returning tide
Sun goes down
All things die
Ring around the rosy
A pocketful of posy's
Ashes, Ashes, we all fall down.
Click
Left it once again today
Maybe it will just go away.
I'll just pretend it isn't there
And act like I do not care.
Like an actor I'll play my part
Paint a picture, it will be like art.
Fleeting moment
Returning tide
Sun goes down
All things die
Ring around the rosy
A pocketful of posy's
Ashes, Ashes, we all fall down.
Click
I don't want to feel this way anymore
It is to painful I cannot ignore.
Every time it is the same,
When you lite a match you get a flame
If this is life, then its not for me
I'd rather bow out and take my leave.
Fleeting moment
Returning tide
Sun goes down
All things die
Ring around the rosy
A pocketful of posy's
Ashes, Ashes, we all fall down.
We all fall down.
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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omg this is amazing i loved it!!!!
this was my fav part
i don't want to feel this way anymore
it is to painful to ignore.
every time it is the same when you lite a match
you get a flame
if this is life, then it's not for me.
i'd rather blow it out and take my leave
i loved it great write
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I can't put into words how much I love your work. This is another one of your brilliant poems that I love so much. Everything about this is simmered to perfection, from the words you use to the rhythm and flow to the final line. You continually amaze me with each and every one of your new writes. A masterpiece darling. Keep them coming!
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Dang girl...this is amazing...really thought provoking! I love this stanza:
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I don't want to feel this way anymore
It is to painful I cannot ignore.
Every time it is the same,
When you lite a match you get a flame
If this is life, then its not for me
I'd rather bow out and take my leave.'
It all speaks a lot and is really catchy...meaningful! and amazing!
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Girl, this is very deep. Girl, remember that if you fall I will always be there to pick you up again, after all thats what friends are for. You are such a wonderful person and you have such a great light. Don't ever lose it. I really love this write because I feel like you really put yourself into it, and I can feel your emotions coming off the page. Beautiful write girl, I really love it.
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