She sings by bigsister1 at All poetry

She sings
She lives to sing
She lives to share
You cannot bind her and
keep her to yourself
It takes a strong man to love her
and share her with the world
It takes a great man to adore her
and let her be adored
She sings
She lives to sing
She lives to share
No room for a jealos man

Not even a hyper critical man

It takes a mature man

a been there, done that man

A man who knows

She sings
She lives to sing
She lives to share

A contest entry

INSPIRATION AND MOTIVATION by Jeremy0826. 550 points, ended May 3, 2007, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Your Very Best by Lj-. 300 points, ended November 29, 2007, 37 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

Please tell me what you think

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bigsister1
December 4, 2007
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What a beautiful write about your sister , I do believe you are really gifted in the area of writing.Maybe you and Jenn should write some songs together
Lj-
November 28, 2007
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This was too simple for my liking.

Thank you for your entry,
Best of luck.
Touchof1der
October 22, 2007
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You have kept this simply but not so much so that one cannot feel the thoughts and emotions that reside within your words. Thank you for sharing your words with me and best wishes to you. Keep that quill dipped in ink and ever ready for use.
♥ Touchof1der
PrabhuDayal Khattar
October 20, 2007
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A man who knows

She sings
She lives to sing
She lives to share

Just a beautiful and heartwarming poem touching and reveling the voice of the soul so effectively..I love the essence of this write...what a depth and what a flow of the muse here bringing a kind of soothing touch to the eyes and soothing touch to the soul as well..
crimsondew
September 17, 2007
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So well written..Like this little song!
all the best!
Texasgal54
May 7, 2007
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wow! teresa you are really good at this I love you , MOm
Jeremy0826
May 2, 2007

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This sounds like the making of a song.
Great work with this poem and thanks
for sharing it with me! I appreciate your
entry in my contest and wish you the best
of luck with it! Keep up the great work!

Jeremy0826
- bigsister1
  May 2, 2007
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  Thank you for the nice comment
Luna Tique Fringe
May 2, 2007
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I like this..very well done..
- bigsister1
  May 2, 2007
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  Thank you for the nice comment
  I really appreciate it
GoodKnightPoet
May 1, 2007
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I really enjoyed this poem. Keep writing.
grannyeri
May 1, 2007

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These sound like lyrics to a song with a chorus and everything. Good flow, easy to read and understand. Keep writing.
Rose Angel
April 27, 2007
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I like this poem very much...and I think you know quite a bit about poetry tho you won't admit it....It is something I must read again....Keep the pen going darlin...you are creative and definitely gifted! And you love your sister! Great write! Great form......
- bigsister1
  May 2, 2007
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  Thanks for the comment
  I appreciate your sweet comment
- bigsister1
  May 2, 2007
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  Thank you
  I thank you, my sister is a sensational singer. This poem was for her.
PastelMoons
April 27, 2007
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"she lives to sing, she lives to share" simply beautiful..!! I also love the line : "it takes a great man to adore her and let her be adored"..That is very cleverly stated ..Being a singer myself , I can relate ,and only a strong secure man could offer such a thing..Great write! ~Pastel
xXxWorthlessxXx
April 27, 2007
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that is a nice poem it remiandes me of my mom's pome.
- bigsister1
  May 2, 2007
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  Thank you for the nice comment
  That was very sweet of you
TatteredAngel
April 23, 2007
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Awesome.
Thnak you. I love ya Sis. I think you found another calling. XOXO
- bigsister1
  May 2, 2007
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  Thank you
  I love you sis. You are the best.