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She sings

She sings
She lives to sing
She lives to share
You cannot bind her and
keep her to yourself
It takes a strong man to love her
and share her with the world
It takes a great man to adore her
and let her be adored
She sings
She lives to sing
She lives to share
No room for a jealos man

Not even a hyper critical man

It takes a mature man

a been there, done that man

A man who knows

She sings
She lives to sing
She lives to share

 

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  • bigsister1
    December 4, 2007
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    What a beautiful write about your sister , I do believe you are really gifted in the area of writing.Maybe you and Jenn should write some songs together


  • Lj-
    November 28, 2007
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    This was too simple for my liking.

    Thank you for your entry,
    Best of luck.


  • Touchof1der silver member
    October 22, 2007
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    You have kept this simply but not so much so that one cannot feel the thoughts and emotions that reside within your words. Thank you for sharing your words with me and best wishes to you. Keep that quill dipped in ink and ever ready for use.
    ♥ Touchof1der


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    October 20, 2007
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    A man who knows

    She sings
    She lives to sing
    She lives to share

    Just a beautiful and heartwarming poem touching and reveling the voice of the soul so effectively..I love the essence of this write...what a depth and what a flow of the muse here bringing a kind of soothing touch to the eyes and soothing touch to the soul as well..


  • crimsondew
    September 17, 2007
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    So well written..Like this little song!
    all the best!

  • Texasgal54
    May 7, 2007
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    wow! teresa you are really good at this I love you , MOm


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    May 2, 2007

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    This sounds like the making of a song.
    Great work with this poem and thanks
    for sharing it with me! I appreciate your
    entry in my contest and wish you the best
    of luck with it! Keep up the great work!



    Jeremy0826


  • Luna Tique Fringe
    May 2, 2007
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    I like this..very well done..


  • GoodKnightPoet
    May 1, 2007
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    I really enjoyed this poem. Keep writing.


  • grannyeri gold member
    May 1, 2007

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    These sound like lyrics to a song with a chorus and everything. Good flow, easy to read and understand. Keep writing.


  • Rose Angel gold member
    April 27, 2007
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    I like this poem very much...and I think you know quite a bit about poetry tho you won't admit it....It is something I must read again....Keep the pen going darlin...you are creative and definitely gifted! And you love your sister! Great write! Great form......

    • bigsister1
      May 2, 2007
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      Thanks for the comment

      I appreciate your sweet comment

    • bigsister1
      May 2, 2007
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      Thank you

      I thank you, my sister is a sensational singer. This poem was for her.


  • PastelMoons gold member
    April 27, 2007
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    "she lives to sing, she lives to share" simply beautiful..!! I also love the line : "it takes a great man to adore her and let her be adored"..That is very cleverly stated ..Being a singer myself , I can relate ,and only a strong secure man could offer such a thing..Great write! ~Pastel


  • xXxWorthlessxXx
    April 27, 2007
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    that is a nice poem it remiandes me of my mom's pome.

    • bigsister1
      May 2, 2007
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      Thank you for the nice comment

      That was very sweet of you


  • TatteredAngel
    April 23, 2007
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    Awesome.

    Thnak you. I love ya Sis. I think you found another calling. XOXO

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