What havent I given you?
What havent I done for you?
What else is there?
Tell me....
Is it something I cant give?
Is it something you cant have?
Is it me.....?
Tell me...you need to
Dont leave me hanging.
Your not the only one
who is suffering.
Do you even care, really?
Is there someone else?
Is this another silly little game?
that your playing to spicen up our relationship
cause I'm not having fun.
Darling, you say you love me
but how can you say that
to me?
you never did
You said you were different
but in the end you "all"
hurt me the same.
I tried so hard to get you back
You even begged me.
You pleaded with your life.
Tell me my love, was that just an act for broadway?
Was all my efforts for you all in vain and for nothing?
How many mistakes have I made so far?
It seems you have all the answers, so lets hear it.
Why did I fail so badly,
when I tried so hard?
Did you just get tired of me?
Was I boring you?
Was I not your " type ?"
I promised you forever,
isnt that enough?
And again,
again you doubt my words with " this "
How could you do that to me?
Just remember that,
Everything,
Everything I've done....I've done for you
Please tell me what you think
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I know exactly how it feels to be left questioning like that...incessantly questioning and over analyzing yourself and trying to figure out where it all went wrong.
The last 2 lines are my favorite.
Great, great poem.
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Here for you!! =]
This is a truly beautiful piece indeed. It is painful and I've been through this as well. This is tough and I wish you the best of luck with the one this is for. I hope you two can work it out. You seem like a great person and truly you shouldn't have to go through this. Good luck and I'm always here if you wanna talk. =]
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Gone
Im to broken to be fixed
My words suffering and clicks
My hate my envy and this shit...
Crush the ones who live for me
Kill the ones that beg for me
And die for the ones that care...
Because I cannot feel anymore...
im nowhere...miss me...
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wow.. so much emotion.. very painful..
such truth in your words..
but all in all.. this is a fantastic peice!!
much love
Ashlii xox -
Such a truthful piece...this is how we feel sometimes..sometimes we sit and wonder for hours if it was a game if it was fake if it was acting...exactly what were they thinking?? Love how you put yur thoughts out, wonderfully written.Sad but truthful which is what this world needs a little bit of.
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this is wonderful. all the emotion. I hate when the one you love fucks with you. when you thought they were in love with you too.. and then it all just gets so confusing. This is really good.
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Wow.
That's beautiful, but sounds very painful.
I like it.
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