suffering peacefully
as blood races down her arms
she cries softly and pitifully
as the world just mocks her
they all laugh and ignore her pain
while she sits and cries
out in the rain
tears and raindrops mixing around
smearing her makeup
as she cries her eyes out
while true beauty is being shown
Author notes
x.one last fix.x
A contest entry
- && all i want is... your best on the spot dirty pretty by over the rainbow--x.
525 points, ended May 10, 2007, 19 entries
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'tears and raindrops mixing around
smearing her makeup
as she cries her eyes out
while true beauty is being shown'
love those lines^^^^ but you've missed a phrase from your authors notes, could you re-read the rules and amend this please, thanks =] great poem =] ♥ -
'tears and raindrops mixing around
smearing her makeup
as she cries her eyes out
while true beauty is being shown'
love those lines^^^^ but you've missed a phrase from your authors notes, could you re-read the rules and amend this please, thanks =] great poem =] ♥
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