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Cruel

How you turned my world you precious thing
You've done me wrong  (as it would seem)
in so many ways and yet I can find it in my
heart to hate you, I wont.  ( its impossible)

Your quiet poetic whispers are deafening
Your eyes....
Your eyes can be so cruel
Just as I can be so cruel

Dont be so cruel
in telling me such powerful lies
that you seem to conjure up.
All this bullshit is getting tiresome.
You starve and exhaust me

You've run so long
You've run so far
but no matter what
I cant live within you....
...you wont let me

Live without your love
Love with out your heart beat
....can you do it?

Your words of " love " can be so cruel
dont hold my hand, dont kiss me
If it doesnt mean a thing

Was this a game all along?
Did you have fun?
Did you laugh?
It hurts to know you might've been lying this whole time
Well laugh when I  tell you
that I still love you

Dont you dare say it back unless
you want to stay with me
Dont you dare say it back unless
you mean it
Dont you dare say it back unless
you dont doubt my words....anymore

Dont you dare....

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  • KillerRain
    July 18, 2007

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    The tears in my eyes are as heart felt as your words. The lies are so beautiful that you tell yourself there true thus getting lied to twice. How strong we have to be to not believe in such beauty. (tears run down my face) KillerRain.


  • Atrophya
    May 21, 2007

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    This is amazingly beautiful. wow, there's such power in your words, many can relate to what you're going through I'm sure. Nonetheless this is an awesome piece. Grrr... now im all inspired but don't know what to write!! I love your work. It rocks!! =]

    ♥ Lady Gaia ♥


  • MutilatedMe
    May 20, 2007

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    Amazing...

    You've run so long
    You've run so far
    but no matter what
    I cant live within you....
    ...you wont let me

    thats my favorite one....
    my favorite line

    its just a really good poem


  • AshliiAsphyxiation
    April 23, 2007
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    whoa... just.... whoa..
    powerful my dear brother.. so powerful..

    xoxo