Blood-red roses and ivory-white lilies
Fall .s.l.o.w.l.y. through the sewer-drain cracks
Seeping and soupy with +refuse+ and waste
Muddy and gooey with newspapers & chemicals
The flaking-residue of face-peels and orange-peels
Mannequin hands and broken bottles mingle like party-goers
In the hopes that someone-somewhere-will claim them
Never finding their way, never being loved except by
that eager sewer-comber;; resplendent in his ~rags~ of flannel
Plastic bags tied around his chaffed feet protect him
from the rats and broken dreams;; speaking of broken dreams:
Why did you never-ever-wander my way?
I must have spoken to you .onethousandandthirtytwo. times
…Of closed doors and virginity torn astray…
Why-oh-why do you taunt me with your lovely eyes
&& hair of moonshine silk?
Must you be so [Glam]orous?
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//Love is blind, as far as the eye can see//
Author notes
i usualy don't like the poems that i write. but this one's pretty good (in my opinion)
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this is the first poem i actually think is amazing!
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Why-oh-why do you taunt me with your lovely eyes
&& hair of moonshine silk?
Must you be so [Glam]orous?
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//Love is blind, as far as the eye can see//
My favorite part.
really liked the title as well. -
I liked the last line.
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LOVELOVELOVELOVELOVELOVELOVELOVE IT!!!
virginity torn astray…
That is beautiful...
It reminds me of someone wallowing in the pain of a sex crime...
But all the same it spoke to me and
it almost felt like it was directed toward me.
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this is fab honney, the lights of hollywood could never outshine you;
Why did you never-ever-wander my way?
I must have spoken to you .onethousandandthirtytwo. times
…Of closed doors and virginity torn astray…
Why-oh-why do you taunt me with your lovely eyes
&& hair of moonshine silk?
Must you be so [Glam]orous?
b.e.a.utiful dalring
xoxo
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oh yea, forgot the important part!
ily
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OMG YOUR FABULOUS BBY!
Why did you never-ever-wander my way?
I must have spoken to you .onethousandandthirtytwo. times
…Of closed doors and virginity torn astray…
Why-oh-why do you taunt me with your lovely eyes
&& hair of moonshine silk?
Must you be so [Glam]orous?
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♥
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//Love is blind, as far as the eye can see//
Your so fabulous darling, and ily so much!! This is great, and those lines ^^^ are what really grabbed my attention, this poem is fab, and I love it! Keep it up bby! ily!
Xx
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Gah! You're amazing. I'd put my favorite part down but that'd be the whole thing. I love you!
xoxo,
Your Dumpster Doll
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"In the hopes that someone-somewhere-will claim them"
well
in MY opinion
it FUCKING ROCKS!!!
love this poem Plastic!
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OhMyGod
This was absolutley amazing!
And, Yes This was by far, your best, and I really love it.
<3<3--XxShotxX
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you are right;;
this is amazing.
i absolutely adore the imagery.
beautiful job hunni.
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thnx bbydoll!
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Why-oh-why do you taunt me with your lovely eyes
&& hair of moonshine silk?
Must you be so [Glam]orous?
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♥
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//Love is blind, as far as the eye can see//
mmmmmmmm bby this is amazing, I lovelovelove it♥ -
Muddy and gooey with newspapers & chemicals
The flaking-residue of face-peels and orange-peels
Mannequin hands and broken bottles mingle like party-goers
In the hopes that someone-somewhere-will claim them
Never finding their way, never being loved except by
that eager sewer-comber;; resplendent in his ~rags~ of flannel
I love it bb doll, you are such an amazing poet, and I think all your stuff is amazing, awesome job!!!!!!
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haha, you are very right!! this is very well done!
'Blood-red roses and ivory-white lilies' woo hoo! i love that line aaand
'virginity torn astray…' haha great job! i always love your stuff, another great poem added to your wall of coolness lol
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