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What can I say now?

When everything has been said
&& when words aren't enough
What is there left to say?

Maybe words are overrated
Cuz isn't it said that one picture
Can say a thousand of them...

So maybe its better to
explain my feelings
with actions

Instead of the overused
&& shamelessly cliched
"I LOVE YOU"

I'll lay you down &&
Just hold you close
Just for a little while

Or maybe the whole night
Just you && me
In each other's arms

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  • Heartbeatsxfading
    June 22, 2007

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    I like this poem alot.
    My favorite part was
    "Instead of the over used
    && shamelessly cliched
    "I LOVE YOU" "
    That says alot.


  • Mr Majenta gold member
    April 28, 2007

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    oooooh, pretty.
    Instead of the overused
    && shamelessly cliched
    "I LOVE YOU"
    i know how that part feels. this was a nice poem. this rocked my face.


  • Tinkerbell-Or-Me
    April 28, 2007

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    "When everything has been said
    && when words aren't enough"

    the beginning just blew me away.

    &&

    "Instead of the overused
    && shamelessly cliched
    "I LOVE YOU""


    bby.
    you're AMAZING.
    soooo. fuck youu xD
    kidding.♥
    keep it up lover faceee.<33


  • Twins 4 me
    April 23, 2007
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    Great write! I enjoyed this!