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Reality

If seeing is believing, then what is hearing
If Feeling is consceiving, then what is balance
Do you have a sixth sense?

A contest entry

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  • rufina caraid gold member
    May 5, 2007

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    this is deep, but in answer to the 3rd line, Yes I feel we all have a 6th sense, we just have to learn how to use it.
    Thank you for your profound entry.
    Von


  • intanglio2ring
    April 23, 2007

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    This one makes me think!

    Dear the rambo69,
    Wonderful work up on the senses, you've created great depth & a thought provoking work.
    Good Luck in the contest!
    Tang


  • cactus thorn
    April 23, 2007
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    A very interesting poem.
    Quite thought provoking!
    Good job.
    And good luck in the contest.