Endless thoughts and aspirations
Suffer unto your own desperation
And twist your stitches tighter
To bring all the hurting deep inside
Let a vein jut through into the open
Show the people that your wings have broken
You're not my guardian angel any more
Cry away your blood through your tears
And hide away in the shadows of time
There is no more hope for you.
Author notes
I was trying to imagine how a guardian angel would feel if there was no more use for them in someone's life. So yea, here is what I came up with.
Please tell me what you think
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Wow
what a nice poem it is
a short steady and creative one
take care
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So sad
This is so sad. It's filled with disappointment and betrayal. You can feel the pain in these words.
Very good write!!
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Good job. Very languid writing, you said what you wanted to say in a smooth, rhythmic way with good use of language, without mincing words. That's a balance that's hard to achieve. Awesome.
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This is so sad and full of emotion. It is not easy putting yourself in others shoes. It is why we live our life and love others and pray for each other. This is a well written poem. Keep penning my dear friend and let hope fill you with words. God bless you.
Wonderful write.
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Sad
Reminiscent of love's loss. words well chosen, flow smooth and the rhythem gool Well done.
*Go with God* my child,
Valerie (Mom)
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Thank you. I'm glad you took the time to read it. I'll return the favor when possible, I promise.
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Great write,I really liked it!
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cool
I always like your stuff, even when it is dark, it shows your heart vibrantly on the page.
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