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My Little Angel Child

My inner child can't come out to play today,
She is punished to this very day.
For being a little blond haired girl,
With big blue honest eyes.
She must have smiled too often,
Or giggled at a cloud.

But I'm the parent now...
And I say laugh out loud.
Smile the biggest smile,
That could light the very world.
For little angels should be heard.

So giggle to your hearts content,

And run up and down the stairs.
Play with all the puppies,

Get mud in your curls.
And for heavens sake,

Give me plenty of big hugs,
Every chance you get.

A kiss and a little dance,
And off you go again.
So play on, my tender inner child,
Till the sun begins to set,
And bedtime for the weary,
Comes for sleepy eyes.

Then rest in precious slumber,
My little angel girl.

For I love you little one,

With wisping blond hair and big blue soulful eyes.

And I say...please come out to play. 

 

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  • Nicada silver member
    August 14, 2008
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    Yes, it is so important to let that little child in us come out to play. By doing that it helps to heal the hurt some. When we begin to truly love and accept all parts of ourselves, especially the little child we once were, than we can begin to grow and heal. This is beautiful, and thanks for entering my contest. Blessings, Patty

  • Rootless
    May 8, 2007

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    I do like this poem a lot. It shows a great level of knowledge of parenting, the best parents allow children to grow creatively. It is not always true that you are only a child once Good luck in the contest and best of luck in the future.


  • Tabitha-Robin
    April 26, 2007
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    I enjoyed this write. Thank you for posting it. God bless you always in all that you do. You are forever in my prayers. Have a blessed day.

    In Christ Jesus,

    Tabitha Robin

    It is more beautiful with each read. Thank you.


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    April 25, 2007

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    excellent~

    She was being punished by being a blonde hair little girl
    but I had to grin when you penned that maybe she giggled and smiled too often at a cloud....
    Indeed let a child live their life to the fullest....
    Do let one laugh out loud and do let one go out and play...
    Excellent sis..Best of luck in the contest....
    I just posted a new one too...its free verse and I am so used to rhyme so if you can drop by when ya get a chance..
    Love this and again best of luck in the contest..
    Love ya
    Your sis
    Susan~~~

  • Seeking Peace silver member
    April 24, 2007

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    I know that little girl, except she had hazel eyes, this brought tears to my eyes for personal reasons, a beautiful write here hun...

    Karen


  • debilynn gold member
    April 23, 2007

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    what a delightful read! i like this:I say laugh out loud.
    Smile the biggest smile, That could light the very world
    thank you for sharing this! keep writing. God bless you always


  • aboomer silver member
    April 23, 2007

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    Such a joyful feeling in this of the inner child and the fun they have with the simple joys of life. Love the image of giggling at a cloud and the other images are great, too.
    Good luck

  • Tabitha-Robin
    April 23, 2007

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    Wow, this is beautiful. You have done wonderful with this one. I am glad I stoped by to read. God bless you my friend in all that you do. Keep the faith and go and play.

    Tabitha


  • going nowhere
    April 23, 2007

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    Time passes quickly and we need to remember to live each day to the fullest. This was a good reminder in a very sweet way. I enjoyed this.

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