Lost into the darkness
As my life has lost its
meaning to an empty carcass
My body will lay here dead
while nobody has a clue
Life as I've known has given
only pain at best a new
Beginning over won't work
for my time is done...
And this is only half
of the fun...
When I lay down and
close my eyes
All I do is weep and cry...
So as my death bed wish...
I say to you the people of
family friendish...
Kill me now and grant my
last wish...
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I'm depressed deal with it
Please tell me what you think
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Perfect
In this state not many words are needed and what words you chose were perfect. Thanks. -
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thank you
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i'm depress as well but it's something you have to learn to deal with, right? i've tried killing myself and all that but i'm still here. there's a reason for that and there's a reason why you're always depress. God has a way with things and he chose people like us to have depression so that we find a way to deal with it. don't worry you'll pull through and maybe we can do it together. i'm here for you. return the favor.
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hey
like i said id miss u 2 much
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Great poem,youve desribed depression perfectly.
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thanks
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