Clipped Wings of radiant colour;
Embodied with the power to devour,
Such essence in small bodies.
Dancing in the twilight;
Taking from their watchers,
Innocenece so pure.
Author notes
Please be critical, was hard to write but i havent written a poem in a year.
I thinki am off to a good start
and best of luck to all
A contest entry
- Challenging words by Lavender Butterfly.
390 points, ended April 25, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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you are more than a poet you paint pctures and conduct the the music, produce the movie and send chill over the set a marvell so glad i found you.honoured
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Nice
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A captivating piece, with immense imagery and purpose... x Thanks for sharing. Love and light, Butterfly.
A couple of spelling errors - There should be their, and innocence is misspelled too... -
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I am terribly sorry about the spelling error, i was runnign late for work so i didnt check anything over.
Thanks very much for the coment however and i will return the favor.
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