between your sheets;;
our hearts beat to the tempo of whispered [i love you’s] && hushed [forever && ever’s]
tonight;;
i’ll believe anything.
[because your shy kisses have left a silly grin pasted across my frown]
press your bony hipbones against mine,
&& slur one more [un]kept promise into my tangled hair.
you exhale (stumbled words) across my neck
&& i fall deeper into you.
your bearing secrets between your shoulder blades,
&& they surface as i trace poetry across your skin.
i’m sweeping my eyelashes [laced with glitter] across your hollow collarbone.
__ i’ll give you everything__
[11:11 wishes send our hearts crashing into a faded forever]
-you wished to keep my heart beating against your ribcage until the stars retire-
you can study my anatomy with cold fingertips.
[your bone structure against mine screams perfection]
i kissed the freckles painted across your flesh
&& wrapped my arms around your skeletal frame
(i’ll never let go)
you spoke softly && promised i’d still be as beautiful in the morning as i am tonight.
angelbean;;
the stars would lose their place in the sky if you swore you loved me[and meant it]
Author notes
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StarshinexEyes
♥
In a list
A contest entry
- Public Places && Tangled Bed Sheets by bird-mad girl.
1200 points, ended May 19, 2007, 20 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
oh angelbean;;
Comments
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oh my worddd.
this is fantastic.
it's fucking hott
but still adorable
and "awww" worthy.
the kind of piece that makes me so jealous of anyone still feeling/experiencing this.
goddd. fabulous job darling
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I relate to this a lot. This was really fucking good. I loved it, lol. I had this (who hasn't I guess). Great poem, never stop writing<3
Jeanette*~
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Wow. Just wow. I'm basically speechless. This is.. amazing...
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gorgeous lanuage babydoll!
gah, I could just die wrapped in this poem and be happy in the after life.
It was so wispy and flowy and sigh dreamy.
but the ending was kind of sad. I don't know, maybe I'm reading it wrong. it just felt heartbreaking
I love you angel cake
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"your bearing secrets between your shoulder blades,
&& they surface as i trace poetry across your skin."
Simply beautiful♥
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They would only lose their place if it meant something and seeing as they are still up there ... ah, goddamn liars. Sorry, I hold grudges. It could be a pretty picture though ... I am just looking for real love. Best of luck to you
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"press your bony hipbones against mine,"
no problem, lol.
lovely write bbydoll.
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WOW
I'm at a loss of words.
Truely.
This right here is beyond perfection.
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oh my
This is absolutely amazingly breathtaking hon. I would try to pick out my favorite lines..but I can't. It's all my favorite. I'm defienantly (Sp?) Bookmarking this. Amazing write deary. Keep doing it!!!
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[11:11 wishes send our hearts crashing into a faded forever]
-you wished to keep my heart beating against your ribcage until the stars retire-
you can study my anatomy with cold fingertips.
[your bone structure against mine screams perfection]
i kissed the freckles painted across your flesh
&& wrapped my arms around your skeletal frame
(i’ll never let go)
sweetie this is beautiful
all your poems are beautiful
&& so are you. ily =]
♥
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"press your bony hipbones against mine,
&& slur one more [un]kept promise into my tangled hair.
you exhale (stumbled words) across my neck"
"i’m sweeping my eyelashes [laced with glitter] across your hollow collarbone.
__ i’ll give you everything__"
"you spoke softly && promised i’d still be as beautiful in the morning as i am tonight.
angelbean;;
the stars would lose their place in the sky if you swore you loved me[and meant it]"
baby doll.
This is so... I don't know.
I'm speech less sweetie. I'm so glad you're happy though. This poem makes ME happy. What an amaze write.
ily!♥
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