On the streets of Tehran!

Tehran's streets run red
despite the Ayatollah
with the aid of paint

A contest entry

Graffiti Grab by rufina caraid. 500 points, ended May 6, 2007, 17 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

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rufina caraid
May 5, 2007
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Thinking!
So profound a view (could this be squeezed into 3 lines?)
Thanks for your deep-thinking entry
Von

Celticpoet
May 5, 2007
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Hey Vonnie!
Yes it could be condensed even further I think...i will submit an edit!

intanglio2ring
April 23, 2007

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(wants to shake that paint can)
WOW!
This is powerful and so TODAY!
Sitting back in my comfortable chair - I know how blessed I am to be where I am.
Good Luck in the contest!
Tang

right now

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