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Love can make it hard.

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Falling in Love is easy,
Falling out of Love is the hard part.


Entry in Graffit Grab competition by Vonnie1
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  • rufina caraid gold member
    May 5, 2007

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    So True - Positive vs Negative feelings. So sad when love finally moves on or out!
    thanks for your entry.
    Von


  • sublimewriter
    April 29, 2007
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    i will remember these words. they seem true. you sum up words so well and there's a lot of power in them.


  • Barely Breathing gold member
    April 24, 2007

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    Wonderful two lines with so much truth in them. I wish there was so sort of remedy for falling out of love. Again, all the best in the contest.


  • Sandygram silver member
    April 24, 2007
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    Lovely Two Lines

    Well Hello Barry, I remember these words well. They are so true my friend. You have told them to me many many many times. You are the great guru of wisdomn on love and broken hearts. Maybe I should start listening to you. . A great poem with a great message. Short but sweet

    You take care,
    Sandy

  • Ir.muse
    April 23, 2007

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    hi my dear daddy

    I haven't been here for more than a week, that's why you didn't receive any message from me.
    Your words are very true.
    Wish you the best luck in the contest.

    Shahrzad


  • intanglio2ring
    April 23, 2007

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    Hmmmm!

    Dear Bazza,
    I like your theory - but I'm over here in the ditch where I've already fallen. (wonders when I'll get help 'cause I can't get up yet)
    Good Luck in the contest!
    Tang


  • Mairi bheag gold member
    April 23, 2007
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    Epigrammatic - gentler than Wildean.

  • montez gold member
    April 23, 2007

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    I thought the title was brilliant Bazza - a truism!
    But as you know, 2 line poems are not my scene!
    A one-liner ; just the title would have been OK!
    Robin.


  • ScarletO gold member
    April 22, 2007

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    Well, you got my attention with that title. lol I have read this before on you page and I have to agree, for it is so very true.

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